I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Amira this is Raewyn. I couldn't believe that you can do that i tried mine and it looked weird. This reminds me that I've done that before when I was a year 4 in Ngakaunui. Which type of line drawing you used? Blog you later bye!
Kia ora Amira I'm Basty from Whakamanawa. Your work is impressive especially the hair colour it's nice. I see that you put your name so they can see that you drew yourself. Next time, put more information to your blog so we can see what you have been working on. The "wright" word is wrong this is how it's spelt "right" I hope my comment is enough for you to change your blog post. Bye
Kia Ora Amira. Your drawing seems impressive and your face looks nice. When i did mine I thought it was ugly, yours is really great. Maybe you should colour your nose black. Bye.
kia ora Amira. it's Benaiah from whakamanawa. i liked how you posted this drawing of you on your blog. next time you could tell us a bit more about what you have done. maybe you find your hair colour see you soon
kia ora Amira. it's olivia H from whakamanawa. I like your drawing that you did it is cool. next time you should add a title so then we know what it is that you did. what it fun and easy.
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hi guys so this is what I made of my self I couldn't find the wright clour of my hair
Hi Amira this is Raewyn. I couldn't believe that you can do that i tried mine and it looked weird. This reminds me that I've done that before when I was a year 4 in Ngakaunui. Which type of line drawing you used? Blog you later bye!
ReplyDeletehi raewyn it me amira for the line drawiing i used poliline
DeleteKia ora Amira I'm Basty from Whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteYour work is impressive especially the hair colour it's nice. I see that you put your name so they can see that you drew yourself. Next time, put more information to your blog so we can see what you have been working on. The "wright" word is wrong this is how it's spelt "right" I hope my comment is enough for you to change your blog post. Bye
Hi Amira It's Brodie from whakamanawa.
ReplyDeletei like how you posted this on your blog.
next time you cloud tell us what your next step is.
Blog you late.
Kia Ora Amira.
ReplyDeleteYour drawing seems impressive and your face looks nice. When i did mine I thought it was ugly, yours is really great. Maybe you should colour your nose black. Bye.
kia ora Amira. it's Benaiah from whakamanawa.
ReplyDeletei liked how you posted this drawing of you on your blog.
next time you could tell us a bit more about what you have done.
maybe you find your hair colour
see you soon
kia ora Amira. it's olivia H from whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteI like your drawing that you did it is cool.
next time you should add a title so then we know what it is that you did.
what it fun and easy.