I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Amira. It's Miss Waho from Whakamanawa. I really like the border of your title page about beavers. I wonder what subject this was for. Some pages look as if they have been copied and pasted from the internet so it would be good if you were able to find information and then write it using your own words and ideas.
Kia ora Amira, this is Raewyn. I love how you make your slide of what can beavers eat and I love the video you shared us to watch. Next time, in the starter page make sure in the Start of your name is spelt a capital letter and also when you put full stops, you should put some space and add a capital letters to make your sentence make since. Blog you later bye!
Kia ora Amira, this is OLivia I love how you make your slide of what can beavers eat and I love the video you shared us to watch. Next time, in the starter page make sure in the Start of your name is spelt a capital letter and also when you put full stops, you should put some space and add a capital letters to make your sentence make since. Blog you later bye and that all Good BYe
Bonjour Amira, Riley here from Whamanawa. Really cool! I don't know much about beavers so it was cool to learn a little bit about them! Next time you should out a little more text maybe like a next step or how long this took you to do! Well that's all I have for you Bye and have a great day!
Kia Ora Amira. Isabella Here from Whakamanawa. I really like the front cover and the information in the slide. I don't know much about beavers so it was really interesting to learn about. Next time you could probably have a introduction or like something to explain what the slide is more about or why you did it. Anyways Have a Great day! Bye
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Amira. It's Miss Waho from Whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteI really like the border of your title page about beavers. I wonder what subject this was for. Some pages look as if they have been copied and pasted from the internet so it would be good if you were able to find information and then write it using your own words and ideas.
Kia ora Amira, this is Raewyn.
ReplyDeleteI love how you make your slide of what can beavers eat and I love the video you shared us to watch.
Next time, in the starter page make sure in the Start of your name is spelt a capital letter and also when you put full stops, you should put some space and add a capital letters to make your sentence make since. Blog you later bye!
Kia ora Amira, this is OLivia
ReplyDeleteI love how you make your slide of what can beavers eat and I love the video you shared us to watch.
Next time, in the starter page make sure in the Start of your name is spelt a capital letter and also when you put full stops, you should put some space and add a capital letters to make your sentence make since. Blog you later bye and that all Good BYe
Bonjour Amira, Riley here from Whamanawa.
ReplyDeleteReally cool! I don't know much about beavers so it was cool to learn a little bit about them!
Next time you should out a little more text maybe like a next step or how long this took you to do!
Well that's all I have for you Bye and have a great day!
Hi Amira I´m robert from whakanawa i like to comment with your stuff because it beautiful and nice, nice jop Amira bye.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Amira. Isabella Here from Whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteI really like the front cover and the information in the slide.
I don't know much about beavers so it was really interesting to learn about.
Next time you could probably have a introduction or like something to explain what the slide is more about or why you did it.
Anyways Have a Great day! Bye
Kia ora Amira, Wiari in whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteYou got all the facts right.
Try and fill up all the space that you have.
Hola Amira! Christina here from Whakamanawa!
ReplyDeleteI like you slide about beaver the facts are Awesome!
but you should explain about what the slide is! But thats awesome! Blog yah later!
kia ora your post is rally good
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