I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Amira What a cool blog post with this music making tool. I would love for my class to explore with this. It would be good to know more about it. How did you find it and is it easy to use?
Hey Amira its Acasia from Gilberthorpe school. I really like what you have done with your song. I really like the beat that you have done you have put so much effort into this. I also like it how you have done the song like to high to low and then high I think that makes it very good. By the way what would you call the song? :)
Hi Amira, Nice work making a song using the Song Maker. I like how the notes go low and high again. I can tell people love the song, some people are playing the music right now. Next time, you can put an introduction to your post so we know more information about the post.
Aloha Amira The song maker app is really cool I love the song that you made it is a cool pattern and it also sounds super cool.I would like to know more about it.How did you get it?Was it cool? blog you later
Ni Hao Amira, That looks so cool! Maybe next time you could show us how you did it. How long did this take you?,I like that it is rainbow colors.From: Milla
Annyeong Amira, Courtney here. Well Done on this amazing song maker!! I am going to try it out myself and try to make a decent song. Next time write a Paragraph or a Sentence saying why you did this or how you did it. How long did this take to make and why did you do it???
Kamusta Amira, Shyla here. This is a very interesting song. I like how the keys go from high to low. the songs very up beat, and I like that. Maybe next time you could put an Intro, tell us how you made it and tell us if it was fun!! But this is very creative Amira, I am very wowed!
Aloha Amira! Nice work! The song is really pretty and the beat is awesome! It kinda reminds me of a xylophone; the notes seem really similar. I can hear others listening to it right now! And, by the way, next time could you give us an introduction because it was only the song, and we didn't know anything. Maybe you could have had an introduction about the site! Did you enjoy making this song? From Mikayla.
Ciao Amira, I love your music! It has a really nice sound to it. How long did it take you to make this because it is really fantastic? Maybe next time you can do a little introduction of what you have created, but anyways this is Amazing. Bye and Blog You Later:)
kia ora Amira i love the beats that you put in that song you did on song maker i love how you took youre time on it i think maybe next time you could add a little bit more sounds in it
nice song i was really bad at it i made a bad one but connor from kiwi can helped me because owen and connor came over but when it was just me i was really bad but great awsome job to you weldone
i like how you did a rainbow it is cool and it sangn good you brought me back to when i was on song maker next time maybe you could writ about how you make the song and what on from olivia h
Hi Amira it is me Addison I really like this song maker the song is nice and calming i could listen to it all day.Maybe next time you could add something why you did this song maker and how you did it otherwise i really really loved the song maker you made.From Addison
hey it's banana/benaiah i liked the way you put your song no your blog you brought me back to when we all made a song why did you do this blog good bye
hi Amira I love the music I just keep on listening it. It sounds like a music for making a pattern and the photo that I saw but I wish that you have been in my class in this year but I am so glad that you were in the same class of me last year 2018. Your classmate in last year Raewyn.
Nǐn hǎo Amira, Riley here i like how you made a heart with your song beat thing well i thik it is a heart because i don't want to dumb welp moving on i would love to see more of these song maker post a think it sounds really nice, cool good or something like that,
Hey Amira its Kaycee here. I really like this song you made hes FANTASTIC i Could probably leien to this at Night and it would make me go to sleep well Guess what i can not think of a Helpful Comment because its Amazing well ill blog you later Bye! From Kaycee in Ngakaunui
Hi Amira I love the song you made it was Lovelyyyyy! I can not stop listening to it I heard this 100,000,000 TIMES OMG Have to try this one out you made But maybe next time you can add more information into it but you still did well anyways....... Blog ya later BYEEE!!
nice song i was really bad at it i made a bad one but connor from kiwi can helped me because owen and connor came over but when it was just me i was really bad but great awsome job to you welldone i enjjoyed the part when you went up did you think of putting somemusic on the top next time you could put some music on the topo maybe
kia ora! my name is Ema-leigh i love the sounds and the colors that look like a rainbow. the way you have done it looks like a smile. it is like a beautiful patten bye.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Amira
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool blog post with this music making tool. I would love for my class to explore with this. It would be good to know more about it. How did you find it and is it easy to use?
Bonjour Amira,
ReplyDeleteHow do you get to it? Was it fun? This is an amazing tool to use to make music. when I am done commenting I am going to try it out.
Hey Amira its Acasia from Gilberthorpe school.
ReplyDeleteI really like what you have done with your song. I really like the beat that you have done you have put so much effort into this. I also like it how you have done the song like to high to low and then high I think that makes it very good.
By the way what would you call the song? :)
Hi Amira,
ReplyDeleteNice work making a song using the Song Maker. I like how the notes go low and high again. I can tell people love the song, some people are playing the music right now. Next time, you can put an introduction to your post so we know more information about the post.
Aloha Amira
ReplyDeleteThe song maker app is really cool I love the song that you made it is a cool pattern and it also sounds super cool.I would like to know more about it.How did you get it?Was it cool?
blog you later
Ni Hao Amira, That looks so cool! Maybe next time you could show us how you did it. How long did this take you?,I like that it is rainbow colors.From: Milla
ReplyDeleteAnnyeong Amira, Courtney here.
ReplyDeleteWell Done on this amazing song maker!! I am going to try it out myself and try to make a decent song.
Next time write a Paragraph or a Sentence saying why you did this or how you did it.
How long did this take to make and why did you do it???
Kamusta Amira, Shyla here.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very interesting song. I like how the keys go from high to low. the songs very up beat, and I like that. Maybe next time you could put an Intro, tell us how you made it and tell us if it was fun!! But this is very creative Amira, I am very wowed!
hi amira I Like it I made one for my own from deegan
ReplyDeleteAloha Amira!
ReplyDeleteNice work! The song is really pretty and the beat is awesome! It kinda reminds me of a xylophone; the notes seem really similar. I can hear others listening to it right now! And, by the way, next time could you give us an introduction because it was only the song, and we didn't know anything. Maybe you could have had an introduction about the site! Did you enjoy making this song?
From Mikayla.
hi my names is ethan i hpoe u haveing a good day and music thats is cool and u blog is so cool and u music is good and maybe u shower 1 step by step
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Amira.
ReplyDeletewhat a cool thing to post about.I love the beat you made.how did you find this amazing sight.Have you thought of any other beats.
Ciao Amira,
ReplyDeleteI love your music! It has a really nice sound to it. How long did it take you to make this because it is really fantastic?
Maybe next time you can do a little introduction of what you have created, but anyways this is Amazing.
Bye and Blog You Later:)
Kia ora Amira Kyle from Gilberthorpe school
ReplyDeleteI like the site but maybe just maybe you could do a little more detail.
hi its Cody nice song bye
ReplyDeletekia ora Amira i love the beats that you put in that song you did on song maker i love how you took youre time on it
ReplyDeletei think maybe next time you could add a little bit more sounds in it
hi there amira i really like the song that you have made, and i really like the beats too and its sound great and bye
ReplyDeletenice song i was really bad at it i made a bad one but connor from kiwi can helped me because owen and connor came over but when it was just me i was really bad but great awsome job to you weldone
ReplyDeleteAmira that's was good your song maker was real good!
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i like how you did a rainbow it is cool and it sangn good
ReplyDeleteyou brought me back to when i was on song maker
next time maybe you could writ about how you make the song and what on
from olivia h
Hi Amira it is me Addison I really like this song maker the song is nice and calming i could listen to it all day.Maybe next time you could add something why you did this song maker and how you did it otherwise i really really loved the song maker you made.From Addison
ReplyDeleteHi its brodie.I like how you but this song on your blog post did you think about butting more words in so we do what it is how did you make that song.
ReplyDeletehi its Cody I enjoyed the first part it shounded nice bye
ReplyDeleteHI Its Hakeem And Crome Music Is My Faverit Thing And The Game On It That I Like Is Song Maker.(:
ReplyDeletehey it's banana/benaiah
ReplyDeletei liked the way you put your song no your blog
you brought me back to when we all made a song
why did you do this blog
good bye
hi its Jonte here i like the first part because it is awesome by
ReplyDeletei like it because it gos hi to low wof a dededede
ReplyDeletehi Amira I love the music I just keep on listening it. It sounds like a music for making a pattern and the photo that I saw but I wish that you have been in my class in this year but I am so glad that you were in the same class of me last year 2018. Your classmate in last year Raewyn.
ReplyDeleteHi it's Nikau.i like how you put this song on your blog post.did you think about putting more words in so we do what it is.how did you make this song
ReplyDeleteNǐn hǎo Amira, Riley here i like how you made a heart with your song beat thing well i thik it is a heart because i don't want to dumb welp moving on i would love to see more of these song maker post a think it sounds really nice, cool good or something like that,
ReplyDeletewell i going to go zàijiàn(bye) Amira
Hey Amira its Kaycee here.
ReplyDeleteI really like this song you made hes FANTASTIC i Could probably leien to this at Night and it would make me go to sleep well Guess what i can not think of a Helpful Comment because its Amazing
well ill blog you later Bye!
From Kaycee in Ngakaunui
Hi Amira
ReplyDeleteI love the song you made it was Lovelyyyyy!
I can not stop listening to it I heard this 100,000,000 TIMES
OMG Have to try this one out you made
But maybe next time you can add more information into it but you still did well anyways.......
Blog ya later BYEEE!!
hi its Jonte here i would like to say that i love that music goodbye
ReplyDeletenice song i was really bad at it i made a bad one but connor from kiwi can helped me because owen and connor came over but when it was just me i was really bad but great awsome job to you welldone i enjjoyed the part when you went up did you think of putting somemusic on the top next time you could put some music on the topo maybe
ReplyDeleteit's really cool the song it's easy to make it, maybe you could make another one?!?!
ReplyDeleteHi this is sapphire here lovely song!!! i loveed it good
ReplyDeleteHi! it is Marsali I like your song so mach the song sounds like mine I love. it
ReplyDeletehi it MARSALI! I love your song 32 square I love it BYEEE
ReplyDeletekia ora! my name is Ema-leigh
ReplyDeletei love the sounds and the colors that look like a rainbow. the way you have done it looks like a smile. it is like a beautiful patten bye.
Hi Amira - Perdita here 😊 This is pretty cool. Hakeem was having lots of fun with this at home too. Awesome!
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