I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello it's Tori from Room 7 Hornby Primary. I like the video and the effort that was put in this. I also really like the dog at the start. Maybe next time you could put more writing. Did you make this yourself?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello it's Tori from Room 7 Hornby Primary. I like the video and the effort that was put in this. I also really like the dog at the start. Maybe next time you could put more writing. Did you make this yourself?
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