I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Amira. Mariana Trench fascinates me! What do you think about people wanting to dump nuclear waste inside it? I find the creatures that live in there fascinating!
Hello Aria. It is Tori from room 7. I think it is cool that you decided to write about this. This is an interesting topic to write about. Maybe next time you could write some more stuff about it. Do you like the ocean?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Amira. Mariana Trench fascinates me! What do you think about people wanting to dump nuclear waste inside it? I find the creatures that live in there fascinating!
ReplyDeleteHello Aria. It is Tori from room 7. I think it is cool that you decided to write about this. This is an interesting topic to write about. Maybe next time you could write some more stuff about it. Do you like the ocean?
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