I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Amira it is Tori from room 7 Hornby Primary. I like your poem and your scary earthquakes pictures. Maybe next time you could do more writing and less pretty backgrounds. Have you ever been in a earthquake?
Kia ora Amira, Well done you have done such a good job on this post, next time check if your sentences make sense, why have you done so much research on earthquakes? That's all from me bye.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hello Amira it is Tori from room 7 Hornby Primary. I like your poem and your scary earthquakes pictures. Maybe next time you could do more writing and less pretty backgrounds. Have you ever been in a earthquake?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Amira,
ReplyDeleteWell done you have done such a good job on this post, next time check if your sentences make sense, why have you done so much research on earthquakes? That's all from me bye.