I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Amira its casey here i was scrolling down i saw what you posted and i thought i should atless have a look and i absolutely love it it really teaches me what a wounderful learner you are thanks for posting it on your blog for me and people to see what you have been learning in you literacy class mabey next time make sure your words are a little bit bigger thank you for letting me look at you work have a good day bye from casey
Hi Amira Olivia here I really like the animal that you chose it is a really good animal information report maybe next time add a introduction and reflection and maybe some next step so that we know like what you like about it and what you don't
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Hello Amira its casey here i was scrolling down i saw what you posted and i thought i should atless have a look and i absolutely love it it really teaches me what a wounderful learner you are thanks for posting it on your blog for me and people to see what you have been learning in you literacy class mabey next time make sure your words are a little bit bigger thank you for letting me look at you work have a good day bye from casey
ReplyDeleteHi Amira Olivia here
ReplyDeleteI really like the animal that you chose
it is a really good animal information report
maybe next time add a introduction and reflection and maybe some next step so that we know like what you like about it and what you don't